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Review:Debra20 says:
Oh my this is sooo weird right now. Not 'bad' weird, just, strange. It's a queer feeling seeing the kids sorted in different Houses, which also makes me wonder how the story will go on from here. We've seen in the books that how the students are sorted have a pretty heavy influence on how they're going to be, what deeds they will do, etc. So I can't stop but think what's in store for Lily especially, since she's been sorted into Hufflepuff. I was genuinely surprised she ended up there because I'd have thought she would be put in any House, except that. From her personality in your story, I can see she's a feisty, fiery girl who keeps to herself most of the time, and Hufflepuff have always given me the complete impression. I'll definitely keep a lookout for the way her story develops!

I'm very intrigued by the development of this story and it's two major characters. I think having changed their background, their personalities, feelings will have a dramatic effect on how they play their part in the events that are bound to happen. Usually it takes only a little to change the future of a man, but having everything this different is a completely different story. At this moment the story raises more questions than offers answers, but I can completely live with it haha They motivate me to keep reading, dig for the answers myself. This is truly a gem. I've never read anything like it!

Author's Response: Haha, yeah, it probably is very weird to behold. I mostly put Lily in Hufflepuff because it was the unexpected choice and I wanted to be clear that all kinds of people can come from all kinds of Houses, but I also see her as an intensely loyal girl, which will become apparent as the story goes on.

I'm happy you're motivated to read on and try to find the answers to all of your questions! I'm not thrilled with the pacing of this one, because it was written before I really learned to slow down and take my time with a plot, but hopefully you enjoy seeing Lily and Severus in very unconventional roles here.

Thanks for another sweet review :)

-Amanda


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