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Review:TheHeirOfSlytherin says:
That was the perfect line for Sirius in this scenario; just imagining having to watch someone you love while they dance with someone else would be horribly sad.

I love your portrayal of Sirius, how he let his dislike of the situation build up inside him and just get angrier. It's exactly something I'd think Sirus would do, so it was awesome to read. It made me really feel for him, I just wanted to hug the poor boy. And I also kind of love that he smokes; it was still popular in the seventies and I like that you've used it. I can imagine Sirius (and James until Harry is born) being a smoker, starting to be rebellious.

Remus and Dorcas' relationship has never been something I've considered, but I like it. Though it makes me kind of sad that she doesn't seem to like Remus drinking with his friends.

I love the way Remus showed that Sirius that he lives life and their little moment before the sad, but inevitable ending. I'm glad Remus didn't go, but I can't imagine how guilty I'd bet he feels. ;(

This was a really lovely, sad one-shot.


Author's Response: Thank you so much! Gosh I feel like it's been ages since I have seen you around. Haven't been lurking twitter or the forums lately. I hope you're doing well!

I always love the idea of Sirius and James being smokers while Remus kinda just smokes at here and there. But never for Peter. Just my Headcanons. I can't even explain them. Haha.

Remus/Dorcas is a pairing I like when it's het fiction. I got a soft spot for her after a RP and I just like their chemistry. Well the way I make her at least. But it's always so one-sided because he's in love with Sirius of course.

Thank you so much for reviewing!! ^_^ --Jenna

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