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Review:patronus_charm says:
I really liked your characterisation of Petunia! She was nice enough but not too nice to make me think woah sheís OOC! I really liked how though she showed interest in Lily in a bitter way she still showed interest in her which is more than we usually see so yay for a compassionate side to her!

Haha, one thing that really did make me laugh was Petuniaís contempt for Snape! It fitted in perfectly with canon and the way the tree branch snapped on her and how Snape was never that nice. Gah I could just over Petunia being nice all day but Iíll end it on how happy it made me when Lily asked her opinion on the clothes as it showed she liked her enough to ask her that.

Even though we had the whole I missed you lark in the previous chapter I still loved it here and thought it was perfect! Their trip to the bakery sounded really cool too and it fitted in the whole I miss you thing because he was missing out on the bakery :P

Bahaha James and Petunia bonded over a mutual hate for Snape? I never, ever saw that coming but it makes complete sense now! I really loved it because seeing them be friends was just so aw worthy. You can probably tell that Iím a lover not a fighter from my remarks made in this review!

Then it got even better with James finding Lilyís diary. I always imagined her to be a diary keeper so I loved seeing it here because it made sense and the pair of them blushing over it was cute! Iím going to wrap up this review because I need to find some new adjectives, but another great chapter!

-Kiana

Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! This review really made my smile - I'm glad you like the story so much!

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