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Review:randomwriter says:
Hello :)
Is the whole story going to be written on the wedding day, interspersed with her thoughts of Scorpius? Because that is such a unique idea. I like it :)
This chapter too was enjoyable as it gave more of an insight into their relationship. I can't wait for Scorpius to make a grand entrance into the story.
Though you haven't really said much about Xander, I already get the feeling that he and Rose are far from perfect for each other.
However, it's your story and I can't wait to see what you do with it :)
One point of CC would be that you just need to ready through your chapter once, there are some very small errors. Nothing major.
For example, the past tense of cast is still cast, not casted.
And you had a few tense issues in your flashbacks.
Anyway, another great chapter! Keep it up :)

Author's Response: Good guessing! Yes it is, and it was a lot of fun to cram a ton of things in on one day! I'm glad that you found it unique. I had fun writing this chapter as it allowed me to explore the pair of them in a lot more detail than the previous which was great. Scorpius only appears in the last chapter, sorry!

They're not really perfect for each other and you'll find out more if you carry on reading! Gah this was written when my spelling/grammar was far from good so I'll have another readthrough! Thanks for pointing it out and for another great review!

-Kiana


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