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Review:patronus_charm says:
Aw Christmas scenes!

Nervous James is ridiculously cute! I really loved the idea of Lily coming over and exchanging presents though I am little sad that the Potters arenít there because they canít join me in gushing over the cuteness of Lily and James then! The awkwardness which lurked there when Lily first got there was really great! It made sense that they were going to be like that.

The small little kisses and them both missing each other was really lovely and tied in well with the festive feel that must have been around! The idea of Lilyís present was rather ingenious though and itís a little sad that James and went called her mad. Hat hair is bad but if Lily thinks thatís better than quidditch hair I dread to think what thatís going to be like!

The idea James had for Lilyís present was also really great and had me gushing everywhere. I liked how it had an academic basis so it made the present even better. His nervousness was even more adorably when he was explaining who the woman was and when he was thinking about how much it cost Ė just ♥ ♥ ♥. It was such a James thing to do and I loved it!

The ending was interesting too, and it made me wonder what was going to occur in the bedroomÖ ;) A great chapter! ♥

-Kiana

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! It really made me smile, and I'm sorry it's taken me so long to respond to it. I loved writing this scene, so I'm glad it came across so well.

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