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Review:Erised says:
Wow. This was really beautiful, really. You have a lovely way of words and the tone was just perfect for this piece. I felt as if I was standing right next to Victoire or inside her head, hearing her monologue. The first paragraph in particular was so well written and extremely effective in reeling in my interest and I found that after those few simple lines I was hooked.

I loved the dynamic between Teddy and Victoire - the fact that Victoire was so fragile and needed him in a way came across very clearly and was really lovely to read. I thought Teddy came across very well as a pillar of stability for Victoire, and her memories of him were done so well.

Your descriptive parts are absolutely perfect and really lift the piece on the whole so that I could imagine everything so clearly. I really liked the beach setting too - it gave a sense of isolation and loneliness that Victoire seems to give off at the beginning of the story. Of course, by the end it is feeling a lot more positive and as a reader it's a very uplifting ending with the promise of change.

I really enjoyed this and I think you have done a really great job in writing a Teddy/Victoire that was emotional but not too gushy.

Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for this lovely review! I've been staring at it for ages just thinking of how nice it is. I'm really pleased you enjoyed this piece, it was one of those stories that I was uncertain of publishing on this site. Mostly because I don't write much romance to begin with nor do i write about characters that are fairly popular on the site. So it was new ground for me and so many people have different ideas of who Victoire and Teddy are and what they should be together made it a bit unnerving to try and post something that's a bit different from most. I've always seen the next gen, especially the older ones a little more damaged than how they are usually portrayed. Victoire especially I imagine being particularly haunted because of the pressure of her name and birth. I'm glad that someone was able to connect to this story too :)

Thank you so much for your review again!

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