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Review:starryskies55 says:
Oh my god, I properly cackled out loud when James threw a fit, that was hilarious. Awww James, don't worry. You're the only man for Lils!

The first short chunk of this is pretty realistic- what do you say when your boyfriend tells you he loves you? Freak out and run away while he stands there, a bit confused. Very good!
And then amazingly, it got better! Lily's description of Romeo and Juliet was very accurate, I thought :P and James' reaction to the word 'love' was brilliant.
You had some wonderful lines in here that related to canon very well- I liked the bit referencing to their fifth year arguments, and their are some SUPERB little points of description "the motionless couple on the book's cover" which is not a big line of description but it really shows the difference between muggles and wizards and its not even a big thing, but the fact that you noticed and wrote it in, gahh it was really good! Feels over motionless book covers.

The ending of this story as well was lovely- I loved how Lily recognised that love wasn't a definite thing that can be catagorised and god I sound like such a hopeless romantic, but love is such a central theme in the books, and you've done so brilliantly well in recreating it! Well done, I really enjoyed this.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for writing another review! You are a very good fanfic reviewer by the way :)

I get so excited when people tell me I made them laugh because I can't always tell if something I wrote is actually funny or if I just think it's hilarious because I wrote it, so thank you for the reassurance!

I've never even been in a relationship (20 and still single but fanfic helps haha), so I'm glad to know my story came off as realistic.

"Feels over motionless book covers" Ahh I love you! I think I'm learning that the little details are some of my favorite parts to write, so I love that you enjoyed them.

I think that was something I really loved about the books; love was expressed and realized in so many different ways.

I'm glad you enjoyed reading my story (and I think I may have enjoyed reading your review even more!)

Also, if you want to read any more of my writing I posted a Jily one-shot called "The Right Number" rather recently and I think it's one of my favorite stories I've written so far.

Thank you for being so lovely! (Also, I noticed you write stories as well so I will definitely have to check those out!)


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