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Review:Roots in Water says:
Hello there.

Wow. What a chapter. As I said before, I can't even imagine what Rainne is going through but I have a lot of sympathy for her. Her problems seem very real and you're not over-dramaticizing them. They're simply a part of who she is at the moment.

What's really amazing is the balancing act you're doing between Rainne and Lily. While I could definitely understand why Rainne is uncomfortable around Lily (Lily- who she compares herself to; Lily- the one she thinks is beautiful, perfect), I can also understand why Lily feels hurt that Rainne is uncomfortable around her. It always hurts when you think that someone doesn't like you, particularly when you're trying to be their friend... But Rainne just needs time, and effort, to become more comfortable around people actually paying attention to her.

Lily's reaction to realizing that she'd forgotten about Rainne being her roommate was very similar to how I think I would feel. After all, it's horrible to realize that you've forgotten about someone so completley... And then to have that person be someone who's so vulnerable herself...

I also think that you did a good job with the relationship between Lily and James in this chapter. They weren't being overly dramatic, which I hate; they weren't yelling or fighting or basically just drawing attention to themselves. Instead, they had quieter interactions that still showed a lot about how they feel about each other.

All in all, I think that you did another good job with this story and I look forward to reading more. Great work! :D

Author's Response: i am running out of ways to say thank you. i really appreciate you taking the time to leave me such detailed reviews, it means so much to me that you spend time thinking about my writing.
thank you so much!

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