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Review:ValWitch21 says:
In complete disorder, because this was a long chapter and I didn't leave a run on review:

1. WOOT VICTOIRE IS A CLAW TOO (House pride is a very predominant aspect of my life at the moment).

2. Cousin banter! I love that you chose to have Fred and Victoire be close, instead of, I don't know, the usual Fred and James.

3. Victoire's attitude to Teddy. The mix of shameless flirting, teenage creeper tendencies and uncertainty about the feelings he has for her was perfect, leading to me fawning (AGAIN) over your characterisations. The part about her constantly turning around to see who was coming in was my favourit, and I could really relate.

Let's see what chapter two and Teddy and Victoire going for that drink bring...

Author's Response: 1. Yes! Victoire is definitely a Claw. She just couldn't be anything else. :P

2. Yeah, when I was trying to decide how old all the cousins were, I decided that I didn't really love the idea of everyone clustered around the Potter children; it just didn't make sense to me. So Fred got put up here as one of the oldest, and Roxanne ended up down there. I'm happy I made that decision now!

3. Awww, thank you! :)

Thank you so much for your lovely review!

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