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Review:Violet Gryfindor says:
This is a lovely start to your story, and I'm surprised to see that no one else has reviewed this yet! Teddy/Rose stories may not be all that popular, but your take on the relationship is original and intriguing - I want to know so much more about how their history and how you're characterizing them as individuals.

This first chapter contains lots of hints as to their past, but it's only enough to make me hungry to read on and learn more - it's similar to what Rose thinks at the end about Teddy's behaviour toward her, how there are subtle compliments and light touches. There is a story between the lines, just behind the words, something that has left a deep impression on Rose so that she can't escape it - it's a story that hasn't ended yet, even though I kind of get the feeling that she has been trying to move on. But it's a case of the "lady doth protest too much" - everything in her actions reveals that she still loves him even while her thoughts say no. Her inner conflict is fascinating to follow, revealing a lot of about her personality and psychological state. It makes for a very interesting story to read. :D

This story is also very well-written, and I'm definitely going to add it to my favourites. The narrative flows wonderfully and the overall chapter looks polished, written with care. I'm also drawn to your writing style and the way that you vary your sentence lengths to really emphasize those short, full-stop sentences - it creates an excellent rhythm, which is why I liked how well the narrative flowed.

Now I'm beginning to babble, but it always makes me happy to find a great story from an author I've never read before. I look forward to reading the next chapter! ^_^

Author's Response: First of all, I apologise for taking the longest time to reply to your review and update. I love Teddy/Rose, they're possibly my favourite next gen pairing so i was really only a matter of time before I started something.

Yeah, they have quite a history together. I'm not going to go into too much detail because there will be more chapters but it's very much a vicious cycle kind of relationship (i.e. both looking at different times sort of thing). And they are never quite certain how the other one feels.

Honestly though I have been in love with some of your fics (especially "The Third Man", yay sirily!), so I squealed like a little girl when I read that you favourited one of mine! :D

Thank you for taking the time to say such lovely things :)


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