Hey! Review #2 coming your way, hopefully this one wonít involve such mindless babbling, but meh, Iím just sort of rolling with it at this point!
Remusí 15th birthday. . . .weird to think of him so young, isnít it? But I love that heís so awkward and a bit gangly and unsure of himself, so Remus-ey! And theyíre spending the night in the Shrieking Shack? Itís called a shack for a reason, you know, broken windows, holes in the walls (mostly due to a certain werewolf, but still!) theyíre going to perish! Hope they brought blankets or something, come on Lily, youíre the sensible one, talk some sense into this scheme! Remus, find your inner prefect, bring this mad idea to a close and march them back upstairs to the warm common room to sit in front of the fire and play exploding snap or something, not the mad things Sirius and James more than likely have planned! Aaah! They arenít going to listen to me, are they?
James, Sirius and their two left feet! Guess we know where Harry got his dancing skills form then! Itís funny, because I always thought of Lily as the hopeless dancer, and James as a fair-to okay one, what with being a pureblood and all, you know, waltzing and stuff at the stuffy Ministry parties! But the more I think about it, the more I like the idea of it being the other way around!
ďI thought Iíd lie on the floor and writhe in pain for a whileí-ĎIt relaxes meí-AAAH! I literally burst out laughing when I read this! Itís just so-Sirius, so in character, so sarcastic and witty and cutting, without being too mean and Aaah! My favourite line Iíve read in such a while! AAah!
Oh James, way to ruin the moment Ďnot-not like our childrení-hee hee, cue more giggling! In a way though, it sort of diffused the tension a bit, I liked it. James and Lily, even when they were fourteen and fifteen, they were perfect for each other. They arenít flirting with each other or anything, but you can just see that spark. That something special. Itís really a tribute to you as a writer that you can create that you know!
See you in the next chapter!
Author's Response: Hello again!
I know, it's so depressing thinking of them as little youngin's who had no idea the TRAUMA AND TERRIBLE THINGS THAT WOULD HAPPEN TO THEM WIGSBFDSJVBKCIK
hahahaha yes, James and Sirius were sadly not good dancers. Most men I know aren't. :(
That would make sense to have James as the good dancer but I did not think of that. :p Ah well, too late now! :p
hahaha it's a Cassandra Clare quote from The City of Ashes. I really recommend it, it's absolutely brilliant and the sarcasm is AMAZINGGG! :D
hehehe James would have stumbled a lot and become cripplingly awkward around girls he liked which obviously reflects Harry (aka him spilling tea all down his front when Cho walked past). :p
Thanks for the amazing review! :D
- Kayla. :)