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Review:patronus_charm says:
Bahaha the hype about those two did appear after all! At least I donít feel like Iím gawking at them on my own now! I really liked how Lily reacted to that but I couldnít help but pity because it couldnít have been nice putting up with all those stares and whispers.

I liked their differing reactions when it came to kissing. The way Lily almost recoiled in horror when James had said that he had kissed loads of people made me laugh a little though I couldnít help but feel bad because she clearly didnít like it. James continued to show his mature side which was really nice to see with the way that he clearly didnít want to push it and would take it at her pace.

Lilyís thoughts thinking back to fifth year made me chuckle, oh how theyíve moved on!

The way you eased into the date was really great because it was a natural build up to what was about to happen but without it being too clichť or fast. It was nice to see them almost go round as friends because the next part made it even more surprising and great! The way the crowd of them gathered around them when they kissed made me chuckle a lot!

-Kiana

Author's Response: Yes! I'm glad you didn't think that the crowd was a bit overdone - I didn't want it to come off that way, but I was afraid that it would. Still, I added it in because I can only imagine that this was interesting gossip in the first place, because most people had to think that James was doomed to fail when it came to Lily, and because kids of that age are curious about this sort of thing anyway!

Thank you so much for the lovely review!


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