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Review:nott theodore says:
Hello! I've heard a lot of praise for your writing and so I was really excited to read this one-shot by you, and I wasn't disappointed - I loved it!

The way that you write Lily and James is just so cute and adorable! They're my OTP and I loved the way that you wrote this moment. It was so well written and skillful that I could imagine it actually having happened in canon. I loved the comparison that you drew between their story and Peter Pan - "They are her Lost Boys and she is their Wendy." I'd never have thought of it before I read this story but it works brilliantly.

My favourite part about this was probably the description and imagery that you included. Your writing is truly beautiful, so utterly compelling and it makes it a pleasure to read. I loved the way that you describe James' eyes - "a hypnotic whirlpool of color" - because they're something Lily would have been bound to notice, and this sentence - "He sits atop his polished broomstick like a pompous King, lounging in the throne that is his birthright" - is so perfect, characterising James exactly as I imagine him to be. How do you even manage it?!

I really loved this story, and I'll definitely be back to read some more of your work when I get the chance!

Sian :)

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