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Review:patronus_charm says:
Shameless plugging works :P

Gah this was so adorable! ♥ I really loved Lilyís thoughts beforehand because the drop of bitterness to them made her more real as a whole and more relatable as a result. One thing I really loved was the pattern between her and James. I think thatís the thing which draws me to the ship a lot and the fact that she immediately rejected him due to her just always doing it was a great example of it.

Ooh a minor thing but your descriptions in this were really lovely and set the scene really well. I can just imagine the dripping rain and the green plants. It was just great!

I always imagined that Lily would be the one to ask out James so seeing it here made me squeal a little with happiness. I liked that a lot and for another reason too. It was just so casual with her just coming out with it which made me chuckle at the irony because so many of us have been cheering them on since first year and for it to happen like that was great.

Iím really excited to see how the date goes and how the rest of it goes a whole because I have a good feeling about this. Great work, Branwen!


Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much!

I'm glad that the descriptions worked really well for you - I'd gotten a comment about that ages ago, and I went back and really tried to make the setting more clear. I'm happy to hear that I was pretty successful. :)

Thank you!

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