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Review:nott theodore says:
You've just managed to make me burst into tears in five paragraphs, and I'm now receiving strange looks from the people around me. I don't know whether to congratulate you or complain!

The Marauders... the stories of each and every one of them was so completely tragic. I love this imagined moment, with Sirius visiting their graves one last time. Reading about his heartbreak at this point, when his two best friends have just died, and he blames himself and another of his best friends for their death, also breaks my heart. It's so sad to see, and I found it really believable and poignant.

James and Lily's story is so sad and upsetting, and for anyone who thinks that their death meant they missed out on so many important moments in their son's life, it's really moving. For Sirius, that realisation must have had even more impact, because all he wanted in persuading the Potters to make Peter their secret keeper was to keep them and Harry safe. I don't know how he dealt with the grief and pain that must have caused.

My only CC in this one-shot would be that you misspell Sirius as "Sirus" throughout, but that's easily fixed and not something that detracts from the story. Well done on such a great one-shot!

Sian :)

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