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Review:megthechef43 says:

I love all the description in this chapter from basically the first line. The detail on how the elves mark the passing of one of their own was brillant and not something I would have ever thought of. I could feel Draco's sorrow and I loved that he was being coniving when he sent away Monty away and was able to save all the elves and I'm so glad he saved Trinket's life and gave her hope and the will to live on through the darkness.

This was a depressing and hopeful chapter. It was depressing because Draco's thought's are so deep and his sorrow was almost palatable in reading about his thoughts on Hermione and Dumbledore.

It is great to read more on Draco's animgous form and how he learned to change. I think it is great that you mentioned how close it was to a lion and what that might mean for him (Think Lily and James and Snape's patronous and could it mean the same for him?)

Draco has been used and hurt so much, by the women in his past, his father, his friends, and even Hermione when she told him she couldn't love a Deatheater. I hope he finally gets some happiness.

This was another beautiful chapter and I can't wait to read more and hopeful something positive for Draco and Hermione.

Until next time...


Author's Response: Dearest megthechef43,

Where does the time go? It seems to have flown by! So sorry for the delay.

Thank you for mentioning the details of the elves in coming to death. I couldn't help but think of some old ways that humans did the same... covering a mirror and stopping the clock. It seemed that it would fit with them as well. And yes, he has a soft spot for his elves that have been with him for so long. Sending the elves away seemed the best thing to do (especially Trinket).

Yes, Draco was really in turmoil in this one. So depressing, really.

I just love his Animagus form. And would make sense that he learned from Wormtail. I think you are right about the meaning (along the lines of Lily, James, and Snape), but as of right now, there are no plans to spell that out exactly. :)

Draco has been hurt, indeed. We'll see what happens to him soon.

Chapter 26 is awaiting validation. It is a long one about what that book does and how Draco feels about it.

I cannot thank you enough for your support for so long. You've been such a backbone of encouragement and it means so much to me.

I hope all is going well with you these days and hope to read more of your stories soon.

With much sincerity,
Dark Whisper

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