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Review:BluebirdBrigade says:
This chapter was very dramatic! My heart really went out to Lily when she broke down in tears – I almost did as that memory was just so beautiful and its sad to see the way that she literally has no one to turn to now. Her parent used to stick up for her when Petunia was probably being nasty but now all she has is her sister who barely even speaks to her – no, wait – who doesn’t even speak to her! I’m glad you had Remus come and comfort her rather than James because sometimes authors make the mistake of having the love couple constantly finding each other in sad situations, which I think often makes them fall too quickly and the story gets a bit…boring. You didn’t do this and I love you for it as I was able to see Remus who gah, is so like Lily – they really do get each other don’t they? His small talk about how he knew this kid, although the kid is actually him, was so sad but I hope at some point Lily puts the pieces together. I think she’d be a great friend to him through that – although James, Sirius and Peter already are :P

Oh and the whole Alrek part! Lily got some little revenge on James didn’t she, although I don’t necessarily agree with her methods. Alrek seems nice, I hope he doesn’t get led on. But James was totally seething – I love jealous boys, as long as they don’t go so far that they start stalking you home and say ‘if I can’t have you, no one can!’. Again, great chapter Jami!

Author's Response: Yay another Maz review!! I'm responding to these in chronological order, obviously, and I got so excited when I saw it was another one of yours!

Having Remus be the one to find Lily felt super appropriate. Especially because I think they would have had a really strong relationship, so I like watching them/making them open up to one another, haha!

You might be onto something with Lily eventually putting the pieces together ;). but shhh you didn't hear it from me :P!

I hope you know how excited I am that you're still liking this story, lovely! I feel like my responses are getting so repetitive, but i don't know what else to say other than you are the best and that I'm loving responding to each one of these!

Thank you ♥ ♥

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