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Review:nutellugh says:
Who knew a kiss could cause a bit of drama?
Anyways, I really like how you write! Brielle is really funny, and I liked how she sort of overreacted when Dom smiled at her.
Everything else in this story is great, but I have a small problem with the format of this story. There are a bunch of unecessary blank paragraph lines. I suggest that you should go back and fix them, so the story can be read easily.
As I said before, this story is great and I can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Author's Response: Hello! Thank for first of all for stopping by and leaving such a lovely review! I really appreciate it and it makes me smile whenever I get one! Ah, yes, who knew a simple kiss could cause such an array of drama?! ;d There's a bit of a story behind why Al is taking so much hurt to this kiss that you will all soon find out. I'm really glad you like how I write that makes me smile! Brielle is one of my favorite characters I have ever written and she's really just a complete nutcase quite like myself. Dom's character will play a huge role in the plot line so stay tuned for more of her. Ah - my formatting >.< I've had others tell me this and i'm really sorry about it but it is something I can't fix! When I post the story it doesn't look like that but once it gets validated for some reason those random spaces come. I've tried fixing it but it doesn't work. I'm really sorry for the inconvenience! Thank you so much for your feedback and I can't wait to hopefully see you once again at the next chapter!

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