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Review:PitchBlue says:
I can see why you don't like to write Aeryn (sadly enough, she just not as cool as the others) but I think you did really well. You're incredibly thorough in fleshing out every single one of your characters, even the ones you don't like that much! That alone should give you an award or something, haha :P It's one of the many aspect that makes this story so amazing.

Cora is so nice, and while she and Aeryn seem different on first sight, you discover that they have a lot in common actually. So you've definitely hit the right spot with Cora. Oooh and her accent! You wrote it brilliant, adding just the right amount of Scottish words (as far as I can tell at least).

The part on Aeryn's discovery was a bit sudden for me, but it had to happen sometime, and I think you handled it well. It wouldn't have made sense for Aeryn to have an extreme reaction, since she's such a sweet person. You made her react more severly to the fact that Peter kept it from her, which I found very realistic and in-character, because Peter seems to be what she cares about the most (or am I reading too much into this?)

And ah I can't wait for the next chapter and I'm constantly thinking about when Remus and Marianne will finally get together (but take your time, those things should not be rushed!).

By the way, your CI's are amazing. I actually wanted to make some 'Wide Awake' fanart anytime soon but now I'm so intimidated by your graphic skills :P

- Laura

Author's Response: I know, Aeryn is totally not cool like the rest of them. And I really didn't have much planned for this chapter - it was supposed to be a filler, but then when I sat down to write it, I realized that I needed to spice up Aeryn's plot line. So that's why I gave her Cora, a fun little friend to get her out of her shell. And that's also why she found out about Remus. I've been dropping hints this entire fic about her not knowing so that's why Remus said it was bound to happen ;)

Cora is becoming a favorite of mine. She reminds me of my best friend sometimes, although they are very very different haha. And I'm glad I got the Scottish accent/slang down! You should have seen the search terms I put into Google ... "Scottish slang", "Scottish insults", etc ;)

And exactly. She cares the most about Peter, which is why she asked him if that was all he was keeping from her. Which is why you want to just punch him in the face when he says nothing else is secret. Because, HELLO, he's with Luciana.

I'm going on vacation this weekend, so the update has been pushed back, but it will be out soon.

AND OMG OMG OMG FAN ART! No one has ever made me fan art before. DO IT!!! I want to set up a Tumblr for this fic so your art will motivate me to actually set it up ;)


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