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Review:Fawkes394 says:
Hi. I can't believe it's been so long you've already finished writing this story! I feel bad about not reviewing earlier, don't think I feel obliged to, I just think if it were me I'd be happy if I had reviews from people who usually read my stories...

So much drama in this chapter!! Jack was hiding something, after all! I was here, hoping my suspicions were wrong, that it was just me being paranoid and he wouldn't hurt Lily : (

I kind of feel a bit proud of Lily for confronting Jack in such direct way, but creepy McFarland... just why!? Well, I know why, though I feel she's really going to regret sleeping with him.

Now, I shall continue reading : )

Author's Response: Helo! I know, it's been a long time. Oh, don't worry about it. Oh yeah, regular reviewers are great because I can usually rely on them not to be horrible. Thank you for that, by the way.
Of course he was. If I ever create a character that doesn't have a Big Secret, something has gone horribly, horribly wrong. ;)
Yeah, Lily is kinda awesome. (I think anyone would regret sleeping with McSleezy)
Have fun!


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