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Review:ephemerals says:
Hi! I'm here from the Review the Person Above You thread :)

This is a great first chapter, even if it is on the short side. Despite the length, it introduced the characters well and the first-person works great here.

ScoRose is one of my favourite pairings so I can't wait to see how they play out. Alice is hilarious, and I'm always a huge fan of Al/Scorp bromances.

With grammar and typos, there's really only a few mistakes, and definitely not enough to put me off, or anything! This chapter's definitely set the scene for a great story :)

- Jenni (ephemerals)

Author's Response: Hi Jenni :)

I'm glad you liked this!! I'm sorry it's so short. It's just that this was my first chapter ever, and I was testing things out. It makes me happy to see such positive feedback on both characterization and voice :)

ScoRose is one of my favourites too, if not my most favourite. I really really like NextGen :)

I'll be sure to correct the typos. Thanks a lot :)

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