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Review:Me says:
I'm not sure how I feel about this fanfiction, I mean she just got kidnapped by death eaters and was tortured everyday, and then she's released she wants to drink and date boys? Personally, I would try to become an Auror - or do something worthwhile in my life, not bother about something as petty as daing and drinking. I thought it was good that she was appreciative for living and for Dumbledore and she repays him by trying to study less and drink more? It just doesn't seem like what a person who experienced what Erin did would do, I would think she got a better understanding of the war, instead of waste her time making mistakes and doing the things that some immature teenager would do. I don't think the message of this story is too good.

Author's Response: First of all, this story is not supposed to be about preaching morals to anyone. Secondly, I have never personally been kidnapped by a Death Eater so I have to imagine what a girl like Erin would do. She does take on a more mature approach later in the story, but she wants to be immature and have fun after what she went through. This is supposed to be a story of being a teenager and having your first everything. The fact it all has consequences- that's the point to the story, if there is to be a point at all to be honest. And it is accurate to real life- you do stupid things for the hell of it, no matter what you might have gone through, because being young is meant to be a constant learning curve. You don't have to like it, and your feedback is very interesting, though it seems you expect something a lot more Biblical than I ever plan to write into a fanfiction.

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