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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hi there !

Wow, I thought this was a fantastic prologue! I already knew that this was going to be a good story because Sianís been raving to me about it, so I was really glad when you chose this story as it gave me a reason to read it, and it certainly didnít fail in impressing me!

I really love Tor already! She just seems so wonderful and innocent to the war, like sheís trying to do her best. The best thing about her is that she hasnít come off as a Mary-Sue. I know this is only the prologue so itís not the best indicator but I just have this feeling about her and that Iím going to like her. I think it was simply the way she reacted to the way the boy was being treated and her disgust towards the ones she was meant to admire which really showed it.

Iím guessing the boy who was there was Terry Boot? If so, I really loved the introduction to him it was just so dramatic and I can heís going to be a great character. I really did pity him here with the way Greyback treated him Ė it was horrible. Iím glad that we got some more backstory about the other Death Eaters too as it helped me place them more easily.

I know this review is short, but thereís not much else I can really say other than this was a fantastic prologue. I canít wait to read on! ♥

-Kiana

Author's Response: Hi! :) I'm so glad you liked the prologue and are interested in the story! Aw, Sian, what a gem! :)

I'm so glad you like Tor so far, she's definitely so much fun to write and I'm very attached to her, so I'm glad you found her an appealing character. I really hope she isn't Mary-Sue, and she develops a lot through the course of the story and becomes more and more real, at least I hope that's how it comes across!

Terry is such a great character to write and I'm glad he comes across as interesting even in a few short words. I feel so horrible for him as well, but of course it was very typical of what Muggleborns would have experienced and is so unfair and painful to write. Writing context and backstories on the DEs is one of the best parts of this story, and it's good to know you thought this enhanced the story so far.

Thank you for a wonderful review darling! :) I loved receiving all of them, and will hopefully be all caught up on responses soon enough! :)


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