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Review:ginerva_molly_weasley says:
This is so wonderful. I clicked on it not really knowing what to expect but I thought it was one of the best Ron and Hermione pieces I've read about them pre relationship.

There must have been some attraction for them before they got together so I love this little snapshot of Hermione looking at him through the window, with him completely unaware and actually realising his attractiveness and her true feelings towards him.

The structure also aided the flow of the story and I think that the little piece at the beginning about Ron being too hot really set the scene here which was completely wonderful!

I loved it

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad to hear you enjoyed the story. I do love my Ronmione ;)

I absolutely think they were both attracted to each other physically (and intellectually and emotionally and whatnot), so I wanted to show Hermione crushing on him. Watching your man mow the lawn can be fun. I tried to set up the second half with the first bit with Ron, and of course it's inspired by his whining about chores in Half-Blood Prince. Thanks again for reviewing!


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