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Review:navyfail says:
I kind of missed Jason this chapter. I hope to see him soon with his grins, smirks, and cheesy lines. I love how you portrayed George and Angelina. They seem so in-character. I would love to have George's hat, lol. And how George got protective was very sweet.

Also I have noticed that you have put the chapters of this story for the Grease quote challenge. You have done a lovely job with the quotes in my opinion. They fit in with situations you put them in and seem very natural. I wouldn't be surprised if you ended up getting a place(first, second, or third) in the challenge.

Update soon. Can't wait to read the third chapter.
~Sama

Author's Response: He's in the next one, don't worry. :D I couldn't think of a way to include him in this chapter without sneaking him into the house somehow. :P

He's in the next one though, flirting with Roxanne. :P

Thank you for saying that! I'm so glad that they seem in character, I always get so worried about writing Canon characters.

Yep, the Grease quote challenge has given me a lot of ideas for this story, I might have to continue finding quotes to use. :D I'm so glad that you think that they fit in and seem natural to use. :D Thank you so so much for your amazingly kind words!

The next chapter is up! :D I can't wait to see what you think of it.


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