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Review:Debra20 says:
OMG Ral this was so sweet! I loved reading every line of this chapter. Finally both Rose and Scorpius had a moment of respire from all the stress and panic their life was shrouded in at the moment. As for them being OOC, take your mind off that because I felt they were very much IC (as much as they can be since they're practically OC's haha). Nothing felt out of place. They have enough background to at least spark a bit of interest in each other and the scenes they spent together were very realistic and sweet. I grinned all the way through :D

I think my favourite moment was their vocal 'love making', so to say. I am talking about when they confessed stuff to each other: how they were, what they yearned for, their faults. Nothing exposes you more to someone else than confessing your fears to them. To me, that was the most poignant scene of this chapter. Having them confess intimate feelings to each other served to unify them more than anything else. It was a real pleasure reading that and I am proud of them. Especially Scorpius, who started this story as a very stuck up person who deeply doubted himself because of the weight his family's name carried in the wizarding world.

Everyone wishes they could live a love story like the one that's being born between the two, and I am no exception. A love story based on honesty, recognition and respect. So you can imagine how in love I am with the two for acting as two responsible adults, while still allowing themselves to be teenagers in the way they express their affections :D

Author's Response: "Vocal love making"! I love that! Hahaha!

As for Scorpius, he is actually a mix of traits from all my male friends. I have no idea how to be a guy, obviously, so I just imagined what they would do or say or something.

Then the fluffy part was actually just all me, cause I love fluff and these kinds of talks!

Thank you so much for the review! Love you! *hugs*

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