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Review:starryskies55 says:
IS LILY A ZOMBIE I DON'T REMEMBER IF SHE IS THIS ISN'T FAIR.

Hey Ash, back again! Cor, there was some action in this! Brilliant! I enjoyed this immensely, like all the others. Interesting scene with Greyback- it would really be awkward if they ended up having to fight a zombie werewolf. Oooh a zombie giant that would be fun. Anyway. Good to see Greyback come back- he seemed very lucid despite being a werewolf, to know not to eat people but instead to get out of there.

the short scene with Neville and Hermione together was cute, she really needs someone strong for her right now, and I think Neville is doing wonderfully. She's going to feel guilty whatever he says though :( And too right as well, she did start it :P I'm almost shipping the two of them...

Two small things- you've written 'believe' instead of 'be' I think at one point, and also, once Hermione knew from Greyback that there were zombies in the forest, why didn't she get them all to go back to Hogwarts?

Again, great story Ashley.

Author's Response: LILY IS NOT A ZOMBIE YOU CAN CALM DOWN :P

I'm glad you are here yay! Greyback was such a random addition for me, it was so influenced by Mike it's not even funny. And yeah, he was quite lucid. I don't know, I think he just saw the danger and went after it. I don't think he ever thinks about anyone but himself, 'cause he's kind of a jerk. BUT anyway.

I know with NEville, I love writing him he's such fun. I think he's such a Gryffindor and it's so fun to write that side of him, because I think as he grew older it would come out even more. As for her guilt, that's something I struggled with for a long time, writing it all because I think you would almost HAVE to be wracked with guilt, but I think I've gotten it under control in later chapters.

Why didn't she get them back to Hogwarts? I don't know, she didn't see any sign of them, I think maybe she wanted to hang out a little longer and get her head clear? Maybe I didn't think of that? I don't know :P Hahaha but good eye for spotting it!

I LOVE YOU THANK YOU xx


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