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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hi Rachel!

Gah this story insane feels time! It was just so heart-wrenching reading this and knowing what was about to happen to me, by the end of tears were coming down my face. I think the sweetest thing was the way Colin viewed his coin and how it was a call from Hogwarts, he seemed to be a true Gryffindor then and the way he died just made him even more heroic.

Im guessing the gruff man was a cameo from Aberforth? I really liked that and it was nice to how all of it linked together and how one of them could have died instead of the other so easily. Gah the ending line is what made me choke up. He really was a sacrifice to the war and I could see it in the ending line. Another wonderful one-shot, Rachel!

-Kiana

Author's Response: Bonjour again, Kiana! :) I re-read this after a couple of new reviews on it, and it was actually sadder than I remembered (which probably made it a really horrible Christmas present, come to think of it). But I feel a sort of sorrowful pride for Colin, and that's where this comes from; he is SO brave, one of the best examples we have of a true and selfless Gryffindor. He went back in to fight despite everything, and just... gah. I love him. I think he's an awesome character.

That was actually just a random character -- although it could have been Aberforth! Except I don't think he died in the battle, like the old man in this story, but I could have just written it that way, I suppose.

I didn't mean to make you cry! ♥ I'm very sorry for that. But thank you for reviewing this for me! I really do appreciate your returning here, even just for the Cup. I can't even tell you!


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