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Review:McMinnie says:
Since this fanfiction has been the recent cause of my sleep deprivation, I feel it is necessary for me to finally review. If I'm completely honest with you your story has one of the best and most interesting plots I've ever read in a fanfiction. After every chapter it never ceases to interest me, and eliminates any boredom, it's also very funny too. I like the fact that it's not solely based on romance, and I like that James still hasn't got into that yet - because it shows his age, and the age difference between him and Sirius. The only problem in this story - and it is a big one - is the grammar and spelling. It's quite disappointing for such a good story to have grammar as an issue. I've come across lots of spelling and grammatical errors (for example writing 'here' instead of 'hear') and also issues in the tense (mainly past and present). If I was to rate this story based on plot and how interesting it is I would honestly give it a 10, for a fanfiction, but due to the grammar I'll have to give it an 8. I'd just like to reinforce that this story is actually very good, and although there are several 'time' fics, or Sirius fics about his life after the veil; I still find this one very original. You've combined two eras of Harry Potter and it is really amazing. I would nominate it for a Dobby if you just fixed the grammar. I can't wait for your next update. :)


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