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Review:soufflegirl99 says:
This is a really inventive and original take on the challenge! It was a really captivating and fascinating story, that had me engaged the whole way through!

First of all, your characterisation of Alicia was spot on. She was very realistic and beliveable as someone that was stuck in a ministry job and wanted to do something more. You wrote out that scenario really well, by the way, and it wasn't too over done and cliched like it often is in films and stuff. Anyway, I think you wrote Alicia fantastically, and her character harmonised beautifully with the third person narrative. Her often dry and sarcastic comments were a pleasure to read, and her witty personality was very enjoyable to read.

The pace and plot were perfectly formed; it was quite a steady pace, but then kept you gripped and guessing the whole way through. As for the plot, it was quite a simple structure, but then they have to be for one shots, so in that sense it was very detailed. The original take on such a cliched story line was remarkable, and quite refreshing actually, and the inner most thoughts of Alicia really helped contribute to quite a lighthearted and curious tone to the story. I loved the ending, and this whole story creates such beautiful imagery and a real sense of accomplishment and achievement at the end.

Overall, an absolute pleasure to read, with an awesome title and a cracking set of characters, with a nice bit of humour stuck in it.

Sophie :D

Author's Response: Hey Sophie!

Thank you so much for the lovely review! Originality is definitely something I try to do so I'm glad you thought this was an inventive/original take, and also a story that engaged you! :)

The characterisation of Alicia was something else I was worried about in this fic, so your comments definitely made me smile! I'm so glad you liked the way I wrote her in the story and that you didn't find it too cliche - I definitely tried to make it as realistic as possible, since I'm also a stickler for canon. Wow, thank you so much for all your comments about the pace and plot as well - it definitely is very encouraging and means a lot to me to hear that about this story!

Thank you so much for reading and for leaving an absolutely wonderful review - you've definitely made my day with all your lovely comments! :)
- Charlotte

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