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Review:purplepotter77 says:
Shell Cottage seems like a lovely place to live! I've only read a few stories in Fleur's point of view, so it was really great to take a peak into her mind! Bill and Fleur here are so cute!

This was a really nice insight into their relationship, and you characterized both of them so well. It's easy to see how much they love each other, despite all the difficulties they've faced.

The description you used was amazing. When you were describing Shell Cottage, I really felt as though I was right there in it. I loved the small details, from her wedding band to how some of the other post-war couples are doing. The part about the werewolf attack was a really nice thing to add, and you tied it in so well to Bill and Fleur's relationship. Great job!

House Cup 2013,
Ravenclaw

Author's Response: I see Shell Cottage in my head as being very lovely! I'd like to live there -- and as someone who doesn't particularly like the beach, that's saying something. ;) For a long time, I really disliked Fleur and wrote her off, but she is such a strong character. I'm very grateful for the chances I've had to explore her more. I think her relationship with Bill is very strong and REAL too, and I've said a lot about that in past responses for this story. I just love that J.K. Rowling gave her readers so many examples of true, lasting, good love, and also examples of the opposite. To instill a children's series with that kind of morality... it's beyond impressive!

I'm so glad you liked my description, too. ♥ I do love describing things, and it really means a lot that you could "see" the story so clearly! Details add a lot to the realism of a story, I've found, and realism is one of the absolute necessities in a story for me.

Thank you for reviewing this story for me!


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