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Review:Erised says:
Hey Lauren!

This was such a great little one shot! I thought that you wrote James really well as the new and matured version of himself. You really captured his emotion with it being his last Quidditch match for the school and how much the team meant to him was obvious. Loved it!

The match itself was exciting and tense and I found myself wondering what was going to happen. I love that James took the bludger for Hannah, two in fact, that's what makes him a Gryffindor!

The scene with Lily and James was just perfect. I like how obstinate she was to the very end although it was clear that Lily's opinion of James was changing which you wrote really well.

Great work Lauren! :D

Author's Response: Hi Jenny :)

I like more mature James so whenever I think of him it's usually in this way. Trying to get the emotion right for the last Quidditch game though was really scary!

Writing the quidditch game was really hard - I don't know how JK managed. Hearing that you found it exciting and tense makes me so happy though!

I'm so happy you like the scene between Lily and James! It was really fun to write so I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Thanks again for leaving such a lovely review!

Lauren :)


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