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Review:Beeezie says:
Oh dear.

I love the way you depict the young Weasley boys, both here and in the story about The Talk that I don't remember the name of right now. You definitely differentiate between them and make what they do age-appropriate - Bill is very clearly the oldest and the most responsible. And Charlie - god, Charlie. I loved Molly barking at him as he tried to touch everything he shouldn't be touching, haha.

Molly's reaction to having twins was also quite realistic, IMO. I can see how she would feel a bit overwhelmed, especially if Fabian and Gideon were twins... and this is still in the midst of the FWW, of course, so two years since they died makes sense. Of course she'd have a lot of open wounds still.

Lovely job, once again.

House Cup 2013 - Ravenclaw

Author's Response: I'm going to echo the "oh dear", but it's because I'm always a bit embarrassed when someone reviews this one. It's not one of my better efforts. I often think about taking it down, but I can't quite do it.

I squidged the timeline for this story - the exact year of death for Gideon and Fabian is a contradiction in canon (JKR always says she's bad at maths), but since I was already making them twins when it's never specified one way or the other, I went for the angsty emotional payout. For some reason, I often like to have Molly be full of tragic feels. And I always love writing little Weasleys.

Thank you so much for the kind words! I really appreciate it. (Go Ravenclaw!)

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