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Review:TheGoldenKneazle says:
Aaah I loved the further insight here into how their unit works - the clever way that there's cover-ups and Polyjuice and all sorts to prevent their being tracked (although the measures being used to cover them up are slightly at odds with the fact that people will investigate random disappearances with no explanation?)

Also - Johanna's flashback was amazing, really throw-you-in-the-deep-end emotionally, gah. It was amazing, though, and I am definitely enjoying getting to know more about each character!

Jean's a bit irritating with this seduce-Astrid business, but I'm betting there's some other ulterior motives. Or maybe this is just because - as with last chapter - he's got that 'man of the 20th century' thing going on.

I LOVE THIS SO MUCH THOUGH
~Lottie

Author's Response: LOTTIIIEEE

I'm not sure I understand your first comment (oops) but if your question is "why are they bothering with coverups when technically these people don't even really exist to the Muggle world" then you have just stuck your fingers into a massive plothole that I need to think about. Whoops.

Oh, Johanna, my poor darling.

JEAN, UGH. He's one of the main reasons I decided to edit the story because his smarminess was getting on my nerves. Fear not, new Jean is hopefully more likeable (though still somewhat infatuated with Astrid, I'm afraid).

THANK YOU LOTTIE


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