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Review:starryskies55 says:
Omg Ash that poor beggar! I love the way you've started each chapter so far with a different person narrating, its very Game of Thronesy, and it's really brilliant the way that you've developed each tiny character, like the beggar, even though he's dead now :( Sadtimes. Should've run sooner. Also, I totally forgot that Harry was starkers, that's moderately amusing.

You've got some brilliant description again in this chapter, although it's rather sidelined for the action, which I have to say is fantastic. You really got a sense of urgency from the whole bit with Hermione and Ginny- and slight comic interlude when Neville scared them :P - and everyone is so wonderfully in character, Hermione's still trying to teach Neville, Neville is being awesome per usual and Ginny is understandably still grieving.. and now dead too. Ach.

Fantastic chapter! :D

Author's Response: I know, the beggar was sad, but it was also fun to write and I kind of had to show some sort of way that the zombie was going to infiltrate Muggle society so that was important. Hahahaha starkers. If I didn't know you, then I wouldn't know what that meant, but since I do, I can say yep. Naked Harry zombie running the streets, errybody freeze. ew.

Thanks for your comments on my description but you're right, I tend to neglect it during action. But I'm glad you liked that! And Neville so much love for him. Poor Ginny. But of all the characters deaths I had to write, hers was pretty fun. Because Ginny. And that's it. Loves you xx

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