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Review:starryskies55 says:
Holy crap I'd forgotten how much I loved this. And I can't believe I haven't reviewed! You are such a wonderful, wonderful writer, Ash. This is a fantastic story, and a wonderfully original idea.

I really think that Hermione's voice in this is brilliantly canon, it just seems so much like her, and so personal, which is great, especially as its not in first person. It was great that you gave us a ton of background info without it seeming like background information- like, about the kids and Ron and what Hermione was doing in her career- it was all weaved into the story very effortlessly.

The scene were Hermione tried to resurrect Harry- it was so intense it was difficult to read properly without skimming it because I wanted to know what happened next! I'm sorry though, when Harry went 'Raarrg' I burst out laughing. Too funny. It was a really weird balance of humour and dark, because Harry was making 'wet noises' and thats funny, but at the same time he 'stunk of death and rot' and that's terrible imagery and if you put yourself into Hermione's shoes, which is so easy to do with your writing, she's just turned her dead best friend who she's grieving over into an undead monster, which is horrific.

And finally, it should have been called Om nom nom brains. :( I really enjoyed rereading this Ash! Well done!

PS.The only thing I can't believe in this is that Harry let a statue of himself get erected.

Author's Response: YAY CHAPTER ONE! First of all you are really too kind to me haha. But I'm glad that you like it and you think it's original and honestly 2 years later I really do think it still is original, which makes me so crazy happy.

Ok can I just tell you that I could cry with the whole fact that during the Harry resurrection thing you skimmed because you wanted to find out what happened? I do that ALL THE TIME especially when I'm reading asoiaf and I can't believe I've written something that makes people want to do that!! Gah I am so excited :P YAY. I am glad you get the balance of humor and horror too, because that really is what I'm going for and while some people get that I think that a lot of others don't so it's nice to see that.

Thank you so much girl, you're an inspiration and I love you again, and I'm glad you like me and so much love to you xx

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