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Review:The Misfit says:
Oooh, this is really interesting! I've never read something that features Mundungus Fletcher, so this instantly caught my eye! I like how you started his compulsion to steal; a lot of kids always want what their friends have and you can tell he's just a normal kid then - but then the adrenaline rush. It's fabulous that you portrayed him as not wanting to sell things on (at least not at such a young age) as I've never thought he started stealing out of malice. The Magpie nickname was so cute, too ♥

EEEK HE STOLE HIS BEST FRIEND'S GIRLFRIEND. (Side note: I love your headcanon of Mundungus' history - it's very similar to mine! :D) I don't think the poor boy had many friends after that :( I'd really love to see what happens when Michaela realizes what Mundungus did - if you ever write that, let me know! ;)

I did spot a couple of typos: making sure he was around to over her comforting advice - over should be offer. ;) Also, in your summary and the last line of your story, you use the word "has" which is present tense, but the story is written in past tense, so it should be "had".

Apart from that, this was a fabulous read! You did brilliantly capturing Mundungus' character in so few words ♥

Author's Response: I'm really glad that you enjoyed this story, I have never read anything about him either and it was definitely a challenge to write about him. I'm glad that you liked that, I wanted to show that he was a thief from a young age and that he developed his skills since then. I'm glad that you liked that nickname, it was the only one I could think of that would fit in with the stealing.

Yep, Mundungus would steal anything that he could get his hands on. Oh wow! Look at us with similar headcanons! *highfive* I don't think he did either. I might have to write that, I'll see if any ideas come to me and then I'll let you know. :D

Whoops! Thanks for pointing those out, I shall go back and edit those. Thank you :D

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, I'm sorry it's taken me so long to respond to it.


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