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Review:maskedmuggle says:
Hey!

I really enjoyed reading this! :) I thought it was a great opening chapter that really introduced Lucy well - I got a very good sense of her character and some ideas about what might be coming next! I have to say that Lucy is usually one of the lesser written about next-gen characters so it's awesome to see her be the main character! Additionally, I love how rebellious nature/personality - you really don't see that all too often!

I thought you did a great job writing this - there's quite a bit of dialogue but I found it all flowed well, as did the different scenes! Lucy's relationship with her family was really unusual, but in a good way! I really like this Oli Wood Jr guy.. he seems like such a sweet nice guy - poor him :( Anyway, great first chapter! I hope to continue reading this when I can :)

By the way, I left you a review on your Her Emerald Eyes the other day and I thought I'd tell you that the House Cup is like an annual competition with lots of fun activities that we do on the forums! I think it's too late to participate this year but you should definitely join + check out the forums because it's such a wonderful community with lots of resources and fun stuff! :)

- Charlotte

Author's Response: Thanks for another great review!I hope you likethe other chapters as well - theres only 7 in total because I have another NextGen story which you might like #TheWolfWithTheYellowEyes - maybe you could check it out?

~ Macy x


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