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Review:Jchrissy says:
Hi you wisdom-teethless lovely! hehe! I hope you're mouth is all heeled up ♥

This chapter turned out so, so perfect. I think my favorite thing about Penelope is how she's able to separate herself from a situation. Like when she is really upset at the start yet still thinks how she'd appear, hysterical, then counteracts that with the fact that she IS hysterical.

Her age really shines through in a perfect way. You've weaved in a selfishness, almost cold, bit of her nature with her ability to look at a situation and decide her feelings on it. She's not going to get married, and she's not going to be her own enemy and talk herself into a life she doesn't want. There's no doubt about that, but the way she also looses her temper and her emotions (like when she's crying at the beginning) is a perfect reminder of how young she is.

Your writing is, of course, continually beautiful. You really made it fit well in the era, and I loved the way both scenes played out! Especially because it gave us the chance to witness to different sides of Penelope, but also left us to see how passionate she is when it comes to what she wants.

I've been in bed all day with a stomach bug, so if none of this makes sense, that's why :P. bottom line, I love it ♥ Like always. You couldn't write something I wouldn't love! Now send me more!

Author's Response: Haha, that cracked me up! Hi Jami! It's healing up nicely now (sorry for the late response!).

I'm glad you think so! I'm actually thankful for that rejection. I think it allowed me to get to the true Penelope - she's much better now. She is able to separate herself from a situation and that makes her dangerous, very dangerous.

She's so dark. There's just something about her that I finally got into after that last revision and it's perfect. She's cold, but seems to have this insane temper. A bit like Severus, actually. Must run in the family! :P

Thank you! You know me, always doing a ton of revisions, trying to make sure everything is perfect.

Aww, that made me sad when I read it the first time. You're feeling better now though, right?

Thank you so much for the wonderful review, as always! You are such a gem to not only beta every chapter, but review it too! Thank you ♥

(Chapter 5 is on its way soon, promise! I've rewritten it twice now).

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