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Review:AlexFan says:
This was absolutely hilarious! I was giggling throughout the entire thing. Victoire really is clueless when it comes to cooking, you'd think that any person would realise that she was cooking everything wrong but apparently not Victoire.

Teddy was so arrogant though, he sounded more arrogant than Sirius and James. I thought it was pretty funny how he managed to trick Victoire though, it didn't seem very difficult considering Victoire didn't know what she was doing.

You had a couple of typos throughout the chapter but mothing big enough that it disrupted the flow of the chapter or stood out. The only thing that I would criticise is that that last paragraph where you explained how they got married in grand styles was unnecessary.

Other than that though this was absolutely hilarious (my favourite part was this "She accepted after forty-two minutes of high-pitched squealing and now they were engaged and had to tell everyone.") and I absolutely loved reading it!

Author's Response: I'm glad you were laughing throughout :D
Victoire really is pretty clueless over here, but that's the heart of this parody. A sexy, cocky Teddy and a beautiful, clueless Victoire. Teddy is smart guy, taking advantage of the situation, and getting a good laugh out of it :p

I'll make sure I read through once again, and fix the typos :P And I just added the last par to tie things off nicely, on a humorous note.
And I'm glad you liked that bit, especially ;) :P

Thanks once again for your lovely review!


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