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Review:ginerva_molly_weasley says:
This is well... just so powerful. The imagery of the church with both Lily and James being taken in is just a little too much to handle particularly when you know what happened that night and how brutal it was.

I can see Remus reacting in this way exactly with him not knowing which way to turn because he just simply has no-one left. He is the outcast in his own life and they were the mighty four and now he's on his own. You just can't quite believe that can you that after everything he's on his own. I hate how he blames himself that he wasn't their secret keeper. It was never fully explained why he wasn't however I can see him blaming himself.

The last paragraph is heart breaking. You have a lovely writing style. I really loved it

Author's Response: I'm so glad that you liked the imagery in the Church because I tried hard to get it right and capture the air of what their funeral might have been like.

You got what I thought Remus would be like perfectly, which is great because I thought my characterisation was a little skewed in places! I hate it too :( I think that's why I love Remus because he's such a tragic character and one who never seems to get over anything.

Thank you for those lovely compliments and review, I'm glad you liked it so much!



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