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Review:Erised says:
Hello! I love a good Rose/Scorp so I thought I'd review :)

It's nice to see that Rose and Scorpius are actually friend rather than the usual situation of them hating one another! So well done for thinking outside the box a little bit. I also enjoyed that it was from Scorpius' point of view as we have so many stories that are about Rose.

There is something refreshingly simple about the plot - a teenage guy likes a teenage girl and wants to ask her out but is feeling nervous about it. Its simplicity lends itself so be written well which you definitely have done here. I like Albus in this too and that he just told Molly that Scorpius liked Rose. It made me laugh!

Molly is so cute too. I'm sensing that she might like Scorpius a little herself? it was so sweet of her to help Scorpius set up the date so it would be so sad if she liked him for herself. I hope that isn't the case for her sake!

Great first chapter :)

Author's Response: thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it :)

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