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Review:nott theodore says:
Hello dear!

Oh, why does Tor think it's necessary to try and make Terry jealous? Although I think it does fit her personality and age well - people always do stupid things at that age. The two of them were risking exposure quite a bit in this chapter, weren't they? Although I do like the fact that Tor is obviously becoming more open-minded and the fact that she agreed to receive the disguised magazine.

I'm not entirely sure about what's going on with Theo (rubbish at predictions, remember?) although I do have my suspicions. At points I think that he has feelings for Tor as well. But I think that he is involved in the Death Eaters, or at least trying to become one of them. I don't want him to, but from what I know of his character so far, I do think it's almost inevitable.

I'm so glad that Tor told Ginny about the attack that's going to happen! Ginny was surprisingly understanding about the whole affair, but then she probably doesn't know that the only reason Tor came across the information is because her father will be leading the attack. But Ginny is probably a more understanding and open-minded person than Tor, not having come from such a prejudiced background. I think she probably gave her Andromeda's name, thinking about the details. Hopefully Andromeda will help Tor to think about things and offer her support because she's experienced a similar situation.

Great chapter!

Sian :)

Author's Response: Hello again! :) I know, Tor is being very silly, but I thought it was realistic for her age and maturity as she is only fourteen. Also, since so much of their relationship is in secret it would make sense for them both to be a little insecure and curious about what the other does when they're not around each other. But yes, they were playing some risks in this chapter! :)

Interesting ideas about Theo! :) Yes, it does seem to be pointing in that direction, especially since he's in a similar position as Malfoy with a disgraced Death Eater father. As for his feelings for Tor, I think Theo is in a selfish place at the moment and craves the support and adoration Tor gives him repeatedly: it's not very fair, but rather typical I think!

Aw, I'm glad you thought Tor did the right thing, of course! It was definitely a big moment for her, going against the DE so directly like that and nearly exposing her cover as the daughter of a DE. And yes, Andromeda really is perfect to give advice on these issues!

I'm so glad you liked this chapter, and I'm very sorry about my (once again) very delayed response! I'll hopefully be all caught up on the responses very soon! :D

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