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Review:Beeezie says:
Hey, you.

I love founders fics, I really do, and I'm sad there aren't more of them. So when I saw you had one, and that it was a one-shot... Well. I had to read it.

And I really, really loved it. Your writing style is smooth, elegant, and engaging. You made all the right choices in how much description to include, and the opening few paragraphs were particularly so. The juxtaposition of her tears and the rain outside was genius.

And, of course, I also loved the content. You chose a very significant event to portray, and you did a great job with it. I liked how repulsive you made the baron, and Helena's horror and disgust was heartbreaking, especially considering when she made that "promise" in the first place. I also appreciated Rowena's reaction. It was in keeping with the time period.

Great job!

House Cup 2013 Ravenclaw

Author's Response: Hey Branwen!

I'm so happy you liked this, I found it more than a little difficult to write. Everything you say, especially as it comes from you (and you have as style I really love and wish I could have too) means a lot to me.

In my head, the Baron never was an appealing human being, until I read Amanda's Diamonds Into Coal. If I were to write this again today, I doubt my take on the characters would be the same.

Thank you for the review, and go 'Claws!

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