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Review:typewriter says:
I really am enjoying your Rose. I like that you're not afraid to make her kind of unlikeable. I mean, she's endearing in many ways, but sometimes frustrating. It makes me feel bad for Scorpius. Yet, I do love when characters have faults. It is much more relatable. I'm really enjoying your little hints into Hermione without having her in the story completely, like in earlier chapters how you mentioned her in relation to Ron's eating habits and heartburn. Then you mentioned her telling them about a monument. It's really clever.

I think it is funny how your Scorpius is so domestic, especially considering how his father had House Elves and probably has never done a chore in his life, unless Draco in your world is a changed man :) Keep up the great work!

~Amanda

Author's Response: Ah thanks! Yes, she definitely has her moments of being self-centered or otherwise causing Scorpius to get a bit impatient. Or being kidnapped by serial killers. These things happen. Characters need to have faults or they're not people, if that makes sense. I totally picture Hermione trying to boss Ron around about the foods he eats, and him disregarding her advice behind her back and then regretting it when she's right about the heartburn ;) Not that he'd ever admit it.

It's a bit ironic that the rich boy whose family owns house-elves enjoys housework, isn't it? He likes the cooking and cleaning and does the washing-up without complaint. Draco is definitely not a changed man. Somewhat improved, in that he hasn't actually disinherited Scorpius for dating a Weasley girl for years, but he considers his son a disappointment nonetheless.

I'm glad you like the story, thank you for reviewing!


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