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Review:SereneChaos says:
Yay! I'm so excited about their kiss!!! And wow, haha, I never even noticed that you had switched pov until I read your author's note--either that's a really good thing for you, or a really bad thing for me (if I didn't even realize!) I actually think the 3rd person works really well for you, because you're still playing to your strengths with dialogue, and you're also adding in more details and descriptions which are doing wonders for helping flesh out the story.

Eek on Bill almost letting the Order slip! I'm curious to see how the Order will play out in this story. Great job!

Author's Response: Haha a lot of people said that they didn't notice the change. Thank you I'm glad that it helped the story develop.

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