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Review:typewriter says:
This chapter gave me a little pang in my heart. I'm from the NYC area, you see. So the mention of the World Trade Center is a very sore topic. But enough with that, because I love your story. I thought it was funny how Rose thought Scorpius was rather uncool. And I loved the descriptions of their meandering through the streets of NYC, because you perfectly captured the feel of the streets. It is confusing, even when you live there. Your writing is superb. I haven't found a single error, even though I'm distracted by how good the story is so I haven't been looking too hard. I'm loving it!

Author's Response: I love New York :) I've been several times, would like to go again. The WTC, I have a backstory in my head for the wizarding monument there - I think wizards/witches in the area would have tried to help during the attacks, so I wanted there to be a monument for them at the site. Anyway. NYC does feel overwhelming a bit as you walk through, especially your first time there. Even when you're from a big city. I'm glad that rang true for a New Yorker. Thank you for reviewing!

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