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Review:Calypso says:
Hello! Here from the House Cup!

Wow, this was so gorgeous. It was so simple, and beautiful, and your descriptions were just awe-inspiring!

I really liked the way that the whole thing was directed at Regulus, as if your OC was still talking to him, despite his absence- it fitted in with the whole idea that life can come from death, that I sort of got from this. The whole piece of writing here felt really like a journey- from the initial grief and denial to the eventual acceptance and hope, which I liked as well.

I'm very curious about your narrator! I'm starting to come up with theories as to who she might be, which is probably ridiculous, but oh well. I'd never thought about the idea of Regulus having a daughter, considerng how young he was when died, but I suppose it's perfectly possible, and it did work well here.

As I said briefly before, I just adore the descriptions in this- my favourite bit was probably the part with him describing the mountains and forest, although I did like the bit in the meadow at the end too...

The narrator's love for her daughter really came through in this- not just as the only thing she has left of Regulus, but as a person in her own right. Her presence was a lovely reminder that life goes on even after war.

This was so pretty and atmospheric. I loved the cyclical structure of it, and the dreamy kind of way it was narrated. Really great writing! ♥

-Bethany

Author's Response: Hi there!

It's so wonderful to hear that you loved my descriptions in this! I also am glad that it evoked curiosity about the narrator. It's so good to hear that my writing did that here. I really enjoyed reading your review! Thank you for taking the time to not only read this, but review it as well! :)

All the best,
Kristen


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