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Review:Debra20 says:
Hey there Kayla! I'm here to leave my thoughts on this astounding piece! I am absolutely impressed with your description talents. Description's never easy, especially when you're striving to write a 500 words piece while caring for plot and characterisation. Not to mention that describing it from Remus' POV makes it even harder as he's an animal when he transforms into a werewolf, and animals don't think like us. I think you did a very good job at describing his conflicting thoughts and emotions. On one side the smells of his friends were familiar, but it wasn't until he met their eyes that he realised who they were and stopped attacking them.

I think it was a poignant scene that spoke much in few words. It showed the bond between the Marauders when they were acting as animals, and that is something I've never read before. Kudos for the story. Great job!

Author's Response: Hello again!

I'm so glad you like it! This is one of my favourites out of all of them. I'm very proud of this one-shot. :)

Thank you so much for this lovely review!

- Kayla. :)


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