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Review:SereneChaos says:
Bahaha, I loved Monique's little foreshadowing there! (And I thought it was funny how Fleur tried to think of the word to call Monique 'easy') Once again, you're fantastic at writing dialogue--the conversation between Fleur and Bill reads so naturally, and it's nice to see the chemistry already forming between the two! I think the main thing to focus on would be fleshing out some of the other details in the story--things such as how Fleur feels about the situation, the types of things that are going through her head as she's doing the interview, etc. It can be tricky because this is 1st person pov, but I think you can figure your way through! :)

Author's Response: This is something I noticed too and is probably why I switch perspective later on. Thank you so much for reading

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